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| djsups |
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Song Title: Klanto Dariye [Unfinished Lyric]
Lyric, Music, Compostion & All Instruments: Shuvro
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Ucchhol Hawai Tomar Sporsho
Amar Akashe Brishti Namai
Brishti Fota Jome Thake
Amar Olosh Chokher Kone
[Chorus]: Janalar baire Akashe te Aaj
Utheche Ek Tukro Chad
ChondraHoto Ami Klanto Boshe Vabi
Kokhon Furobe E Raat...
Tomar Ashai Dinta Gelo
Tomay Vebe Shob Elomelo
Tobuo Keno Boshe Vabi
Tomari Kotha Ami ...
This song is one of my unfinished projects...
Recording is not good.... but still i am sharing
this song to know how it is...i mean lyric and muzic
not the composition...it needs a lots of work in the
composition sector...
It is Unfinished because this song need sum
more lines of lyric...And whatever I tried
to wrote for this song was not good enough
to add...Now I have given this responsibility
to complete this lyric to My Friend ISMA, Who
is also the lyricist of My Favourite song
JochhonaHoto...
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| shuknopata |
| Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 12:59 am |
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| Gaanta OK.lyric good. Waiting 4 Final version. |
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| ShAdOw_FoRcE |
| Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 1:16 am |
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nice one!
full version kobe ashbe??  |
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| RaaT jaGa KoBi |
| Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 2:20 am |
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Well done, buddy.....
awesome....
want full song, plz.... |
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| nazibul78 |
| Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:50 am |
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Joined: 28 Jan 2007
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| beshi ekta bhalo laglona...ekhoni album er release kora uchit hobena....golai onek improvement dorkar achey bole mone hoi. |
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| djsups |
| Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:18 am |
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*** célébre ***
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thnx buddy ...for honest commentz...
Appreciated....
but i've already recorded my studio master for a mixed album....
JochhonaHoto...
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| MaiYaPaIn |
| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:50 am |
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joss tune, lyrics tao shundor. but bhaiya, one thing though and let me be very honest about it. Tomar vocal besh beshura lagche thruout the whole song. Scale onek up-down korche. Golar kaaj thik moto hoy nai, korte giye scale change hoye jachche. I know this is not final, but I hope in the final version your vocal will sound much better. All the best!  |
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| djsups |
| Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 10:59 am |
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*** célébre ***
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| Consider it done........Cuz U R the BOSS....Anything u say.... |
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| blue_phoenix |
| Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:51 pm |
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music er vetor diye kotha ta shunte ektu prob hoi...r ektu jhapsha mone hoi..like cloudy...
tune valo
final er jonne wait korchi
the lyric is specciallly nice
*[Chorus]: Janalar baire Akashe te Aaj
Utheche Ek Tukro Chad
ChondraHoto Ami Klanto Boshe Vabi
Kokhon Furobe E Raat*
ei part ta joss but chorus ta shunlam na keno?
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| djsups |
| Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 10:03 am |
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*** célébre ***
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its only a demo... composition is nt fixed yet...
final version will b a unplugged one...lyric is not complete yet...
more work to do...
again thanx for the appreciation... |
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